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:icondoofusmaximus:

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On the left, you have Swedish Lyrics, and on the right, the english.

And, so you know. I can do the Para Para. Not that you care, but I can. And I'm awesome.

And the Camera Turned it blue, but I don't really Care.

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:iconkyokatchan:
Okay, although I REALLY don't want to write this all over again, I will because you're awsome.

And also because I don't want to type this out again it will no longer be in the nice, polite sentence form. I will use that in the next deviation someone requests criteqe on.

-folds in clothes = good
-hips only slightly too small. hips tend to = shoulders in width
-eyes not a huge problem but make sure that unless it's an angled picture they're the same size. also make sure they are looking the same way, slight differences can make big problems
-arms good but how far you drew the lines for the elbow flod makes it seem a bit like the arm's bending ackwardly - I sugest rounding the oh hell, I can't describe this I'll draw it and link here - and if you need more bend add more crease but make sure the crease is going straight toward the point on the elbow see dotted red guide line.....erm on second thought I'll hand it to you in school tomoorrow. the vervsion I drew on here REALLY sucks b/c I drew it with the mouse that's acting p b/c my pentablet needs to be reinstalled. but yeah that's it.
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:icongottaluvthev13:
Epic picture is epic :D

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:iconkyokatchan:
SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

I had just written a (hopefully) helpful criteque that was over a hundred FN words!!!!! then the page went back and deleted IT!!!

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:icondoofusmaximus:
How am I supposed to respond to that?..... Sorry?
oh,I know.

I AM SO SORRY KYO! It must be terrible to loose so much. (Happens to me, when writing journals. I feel your pain.)

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:iconkyokatchan:
It's just that I hate typing anything long.

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:iconchobtheothgipod:
its about time you uploaded it XDD

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:icondoofusmaximus:
yeah xD

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:icondoofusmaximus:
Sowwy :(

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:iconchobtheothgipod:
looks nice, muy nice.

(gunna add cassius on here too?) lmao

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:icondoofusmaximus:
When I finish it. Maybe. I dunno.

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